Friday, October 30, 2009
Reading Response #4
As Nick Carr says “Most of the proprietors of the commercial internet have a financial stake in collecting the crumbs of data we leave behind as we flit from link to link – the more crumbs, the better. The last thing internet companies want is to encourage leisurely reading or slow, concentrated thought. It is in their economic interest to drive us to distraction.” (GMUS) Carr's claim is that because internet companies have so much invested in people visiting different websites, and thus seeing different advertisements in the side bars of these websites, they are willing to design websites with the intention of the reader needing to go to to another website after viewing the one they are currently on. This earns the internet companies more money because of all the other companies paying for advertising space on their websites.
Another important claim that Carr makes is what I believe to be his central claim for this article. Carr state that “In the world of 2001, people have become so machinelike that the most human character turns out to be a machine. That's the essence of Kubrick's dark prophecy: as we come to rely on the computers to mediate our understanding of the world, it is our own intelligence that flattens into artificial intelligence.” (GMUS) I believe that Carr's claim is very straight forward and very powerful. Carr's claim is that all of the exposure people have to internet knowledge and how people must navigate from page to page to page to page in order to find what they are looking for, has slowly been building up to the creation of the machinelike people, it has been building up to the loss of our own intelligence and the increase of artificial intelligence.
I disagree with Nick Carr's claim, because I believe that this is just a part of the advancement in technology just like so many other things have. Just as humans have moved on from stone tablets to parchment, we are beginning to move from paper to the internet. I am not saying that we will no longer have a place for books, at least not in the near future. Books are still a great resource and very some people a more enjoyable method of harvesting information. But the internet much faster and more efficient then books, and for most people a Google search fits the bill. I don't believe that the internet is damaging the they way we think. I simply think that it is a natural change as technology progresses.
Reading Responce # 4
Reading Response 4
Carr also talks about how the internet has been a blessing to him and other writers as it has all the possible information you could ever want, it’s just that all the techniques can be abused like anything. Carr claims that “The net is becoming a universal medium, the conduit for most of the information that flows through my eyes and ears and into my mind.” The main idea behind this, is that the heavy influence of the internet has been a great help to all especially writers due to the easy access to all the information that would be useful to their book or article. It has allowed for them to get their hands on papers or articles that would have taken days or hours to find using a library with only print sources.
The biggest problem Carr states is that Google and the internet have made research too easy, as all you have to do is throw in a few keywords and all the information will automatically be sorted the most you have to do is click on the links or click on the back button. This had meant that we have lost our touch of analyzing that was built up by reading books or having to read the whole article to get the necessary parts out. I agree with Carr as I have seen these changes personally in my life, as I have even gotten older and you would believe I would be able to see my analyzing skills get much stronger as I mature.
Thursday, October 29, 2009
Is Google Making Us Stupid?
In Carr’s article he claims that “The human brain is almost infinitely malleable.” He also quotes James Olds, a professor of neuroscience who directs the Krasnow Institute for Advanced Study at George Mason University, who states that the mind “is very plastic.” And that it “has the ability to reprogram itself on the fly, altering the way it functions.” Here Carr is basically saying that our brain has the ability to change rapidly and drastically when needed. Because of the internet he claims that we are becoming less familiar with the way of reading that involves deep understanding. I agree with Carr and Olds that the mind does have the ability to change.
Carr also makes an important claim concerning our focus when reading. “I’m not thinking the way I used to think. I can feel it most strongly when I’m reading. Immersing myself in a book or a lengthy article used to be easy. My mind would get caught up in the narrative or the turns of the argument, and I’d spend hours strolling through long stretches of prose. That’s rarely the case anymore. Now my concentration often starts to drift after two or three pages. I get fidgety, lose the thread, begin looking for something else to do. I feel as if I’m always dragging my wayward brain back to the text. The deep reading that used to come naturally has become a struggle.” In making this claim, Carr argues that because of the internet we are no longer able to spend hours in reading long ordinary writings. I’m of two minds about Carr’s claim that the internet is causing us to be unable to read “long stretches of prose” deeply. On the one hand, I agree that we read less and less of lengthy good prose. On the other hand “I believe we still have the ability to read deeply when it is necessary”.
As our minds change in the way we read, we are beginning to skim over and move on without understanding and reading deeply. I believe Carr is right in saying that because of the internet our minds are conforming to its new life style.
Reading Response 4 :)
I think one of the strongest claims in Nick Carr’s article “Is Google Making Us Stupid?” is when he says, “The human brain is almost infinitely malleable.” He was referring to his earlier example of writing with a type writer compared to hand written and how he thought differently. His main point in the article seems to be our concentration and attention span. He gives the example of him not being about to read large sums at once. He starts to basically blame this on technology. The internet makes everything easier to get to faster. It seems as though he believes that this fast based technology is changing the way we think altogether. With every new technology comes new ways of thinking and Carr gives examples from the clock to the internet. I think this is an important claim because it seems to link all of his examples together.
Another strong claim in Carr’s article would have to be when he says, “Wolf worries that the style of reading promoted by the Net, a style that puts “efficiency” and “immediacy” above all else, may be weakening our capacity for the kind of deep reading that emerged when an earlier technology, the printing press, made long and complex works of prose commonplace. When we read online, she says, we tend to become “mere decoders of information.” Our ability to interpret text, to make the rich mental connections that form when we read deeply and without distraction, remains largely disengaged.” This again goes back to the other quote I used earlier but strengthens it. It goes back to the main concept that the internet is changing our minds, and the way we think. I think this was a claim but it was also part of the evidence for the first quote that I used. It explains how are brains are malleable and supports the claim with authority.
Although I agree with Carr up to a point, I cannot accept his overall conclusion that the internet is to blame completely. I think there are many other contributing factors besides internet. It seems to me that everything nowadays is fast paced not just the computer. Driving now is scary. Going the speed limit is “slow driving”. Everything has to be done quickly and nobody stops moving. It is more than just the concentrating on reading. Can we blame this fast-paced lifestyle solely on the internet?
Is Google making us stupid?
Carr continues, “Over the past few years I’ve had the uncomfortable sense that someone, or something, has been tinkering with my brain, remapping the neural circuitry, reprogramming the memory. My mind isn’t going-it’s changing.” He noticed that his concentration had become short lived. Once he could lose time in literature and now he struggled to keep his focus after a few pages or even a few paragraphs. But Carr is not alone; other literary types have detected the change. Scott Carp, a blogger, has also taken notice of this phenomenon. Once a literature major in college and a “voracious reader” Carr confesses he has practically given up reading books altogether. The Internet has drastically altered the way we read and think; the shift has been subtle but very real. A study on online research habits done by University College of London perceives it. They noticed that people “hopped” from site to site and source to source, never staying at any one site for more than two pages.
The internet has provided the world with an unimaginable resource but anecdotal information is not reliable enough to base our reading habits off of. If Carr, Carp and the University College of London are right, which I think they are, our reading proficiency has taken a terrible nose dive into a shallow pool. I fear that with my constant exposure to media (i.e. television, internet, radio and print) I too will fall victim to this rewiring trend. The idea that my mind could so easily be taken hostage and reconfigured is frightening. Losing a piece of myself was never a part of the plan when I logged onto the internet.
Areisha's Reading Response to Nick Carr
Reading Response to "Is Google Making Us Stupid?"
Another important claim Carr makes is how text messaging is also changing the way we read. He writes “Thanks to the ubiquity of text on the Internet, not to mention the popularity of text-messaging on cell phones, we may well be reading more today than we did in the 1970’s or 1980’s, when television was our medium of choice. But it’s a different kind of reading, and behind it lies a different kind of thinking—perhaps even a new sense of the self.” In making this statement Carr is not saying that using the internet and text messaging is necessarily a bad thing, in fact he writes that the general public may be writing more then ever before. However, he does say it’s changing the way we read. He states that our brains are becoming less able to concentrate and that this new fast technology is the reason.
I agree that the internet has changed the way we used to read. A point that needs emphasizing since so many people don’t realize how fast their capacity to concentrate is disintegrating. Through television, internet and the overall media the general public is being fed rapid text and images. We have been trained to quickly read something, maybe think about it for a few moments then move onto something else. The days of reading a book by the fire and discussing what we have read with a friend are nearly gone. This means the next generations will rarely experience that kind of reading. This is an inevitable change and, like the clock, we eventually won’t be able to imagine a world without it.
Reading Response 4
Car introduces many other ideas throughout his entire paper. Car shares, “The human brain is almost infinitely malleable.” A prior thought was that people’s brains were “hard wired” after a certain point in life. The brain is fully developed after the age of twenty-five, but the way that the information travels isn’t all established. Now, after moving to using computers to help people gather information. The brain starts to operate much differently. The brain slowly starts to act like a computer. This proves that the brain isn’t fully established. The wiring that we have established throughout education is there, but after using the computer the wiring started to change. The wiring can still change anytime, just if the thinker starts to change their habits. I have read this article a few times. I agree with both of the points the Car established in his work. I think that this is true, because many people my age do not fully read educational assignments. Car’s article was seven pages long, and I am surprised many of the people finished the reading. Skimming has become much more popular as the Internet has became more popular. When the article at which is being analyzed gets longer more and more people get turned off of finishing. I think that we are more like are computers in this way. I agree with the fact that our brains are malleable too. I have seen many people change their habits. Then, when they think that they can go back the can’t possibly go back. Personally I think that the article is confronting a topic the is very debatable depending on where you stand.
Reading Response 4
Car introduces many other ideas throughout his entire paper. Car shares, “The human brain is almost infinitely malleable.” A prior thought was that people’s brains were “hard wired” after a certain point in life. The brain is fully developed after the age of twenty-five, but the way that the information travels isn’t all established. Now, after moving to using computers to help people gather information. The brain starts to operate much differently. The brain slowly starts to act like a computer. This proves that the brain isn’t fully established. The wiring that we have established throughout education is there, but after using the computer the wiring started to change. The wiring can still change anytime, just if the thinker starts to change their habits. I have read this article a few times. I agree with both of the points the Car established in his work. I think that this is true, because many people my age do not fully read educational assignments. Car’s article was seven pages long, and I am surprised many of the people finished the reading. Skimming has become much more popular as the Internet has became more popular. When the article at which is being analyzed gets longer more and more people get turned off of finishing. I think that we are more like are computers in this way. I agree with the fact that our brains are malleable too. I have seen many people change their habits. Then, when they think that they can go back the can’t possibly go back. Personally I think that the article is confronting a topic the is very debatable depending on where you stand.
Reading Response #4
Carr also feels that the internet is too abundant in our lives and that it is filling up too much space in our brains. He argues that “If we lose those quiet spaces, or fill them up with “content,” we will sacrifice something important not only in our selves but in our culture.” In this quote he is arguing that with out deep thinking and reading we will lose ourselves, and the culture that we come from. He continues to say that by losing that space we will be spreading ourselves too thin and won’t have enough capacity to truly learn and comprehend what he read. I strongly agree with Carr when he says that losing quiet spaces will lead to us losing our sense of self. Personally I am afraid that because I am constantly surrounded by media, internet, and television I’m losing my own thoughts and just taking on those of what I see and hear every single day. I feel that these outlets have hindered my uniqueness.
Responce to Nick Carr's article
Carr attributes his changing patterns to the time he has spent using the Internet, saying that "My mind now expects to take in information the way the Net distributes it: in a swiftly moving stream of particles." Backing up this statement he sites a couple of different studies on the development of the brain. Most notably for me was what Maryanne Wolf had to say on the subject. Wolf a psychologist at Tufts University and the author of Proust and the Squid: The Story and Science of the Reading Brain says "We are not only what we read, we are how we read". She explains that the way we learn to read affects the way the neural circuits and pathways of the brain develop, and that the style of reading promoted by the Internet may be weakening our ability for deep reading.
I agree that there is cause to be concerned over this because my friend’s and family’s own experiences confirm it. Not having a lot of experience on the Net myself I asked some people close to me what they felt on this subject, and almost all of them said they are experiencing the same phenomena in differing degrees. This disturbed me because I enjoy the way I read, and how it feels to curl up on the couch with a good book and get lost in the story. The idea that this fundamental part of who I am could be lost, in any degree, is simply unacceptable to me.
Reading Response 4, Nick Carr article
In Nick Carr’s article , “Is Google Making Us Stupid?”, he deeply explains what the internet is doing to our brain’s. He also makes clear that deep reading these days has changed for him greatly, now not being able to focus in when reading a couple pages. Nick Carr also uses examples of how technology is changing our lives. In the article Nick Carr references Lewis Mumford from his article, “Technics and Civilization”, about a clock. In “Is Google Making Us Stupid?”, Carr states, “The clocks methodical ticking helped bring into being the scientific mind and the scientific man.” What Nick Carr is basically trying to point out is that clocks are starting to take over our day. We are living by a clock, rather our bodies. If it wasn’t for a clock we wouldn’t be waking up so early to be going to work or school. If it was up to our bodies we would be getting that extra few hours of sleep that are greatly needed for us to function properly during the day. Now we just depend on clocks so we can get up and about, not listening to our bodies trying to pull you back under the covers.
Deeper into the article “Is Google Making Us Stupid? Nick Carr talks about Fredrick Winslow Taylor. Taylor carried around a stopwatch and started playing around with how efficient the workers at the Midvale steel plant in Philadelphia could work if they worked off time from the stopwatch. Through the years this practice soon evolved through many different companies so that they could be more and more efficient. Soon enough this technology reached Google. As it says in the article, “Google’s headquarters, in Mountain View, California-the Googleplex- is the Internets high church, and the religion practiced inside the walls is Taylorism. According to Eric Schmidt, Google’s chief executive, it’s “a company that’s founded around the science of measurement.” Being one of the most popular internet sites ever, and the most used search engine, Google is constantly doing different experiments to make themselves more efficient, even though they are at the top of the Internet search engine chain. With thousands and thousands of different experiments a day, Google can pretty much safely say that they are the “perfect search engine.” Thanks to Frederick Winslow Taylor, everything will be more efficient.
This article does a good job of explaining how these forms of technology are changing the way we are living today. From the clock waking us up every morning, to Fredrick Winslow Taylor’s method of efficiency with the stopwatch. These thing’s as well as the internet and Google are changing our everyday lives.
Reading Respones #4 (Is Google.....)
Nick Carr believes that technology is changing the way peoples brains work. In his article he claims that “The human brain is almost infinitely malleable.” his evidence backs this up, “a Professor of neuroscience,.. says that even the adult mind “is very plastic.” The professor goes on to state that “The brain has the ability to reprogram itself on the fly, altering the way it functions.” Carr is trying to prove that the brain is always changing, and that the way people think and or operate is changing as well. I agree that the human brain is always changing, I know that I think a lot differently know than I did even last year at this time. I think everything we do and every experience we have changes the way we think, not just technology.
Later on in Carr's article he maintains that technology is not only changing the way we think, it's changing us all together. “As we use what the sociologist Daniel Bell has called our “intellectual technologies”- tools that extend out mental rather that our physical capacities- we inevitably begin to take on the qualities of those technologies”. Basically Carr is saying that people are becoming more like technology. I agree with Carr up to a point. I do believe that technology has defiantly changed the way people think and the way we do things today. On the other hand I'm not sure if people are becoming like technology or thinking like computers think. I also think it's important to mention that everything changes the way we think and the way our brains work not just technology.
Reading Response 4
Nick Carr's Reading Response
On page 3 of Carr’s, “Is Google Making Us Stupid”, he states, “The human brain almost infinitely malleable.” I agree with this statement because there are several different influences over the way people think or view things. Computers and technology are not the only influences that are playing a part in how people think, but there are things such as advertisements or peer pressure. For example, make up advertisements can make women feel insecure about the way they look, lowering their self-esteem. As a result, they buy the product because in their minds they think they need it to feel prettier. And people’s peers influence how people think incredibly. The majority of teens almost always follow the crowd and end up believing what teens have labeled as “cool”. These senses of what things are “cool” changes all the time, which in turn, is influencing the minds of the other teens.
Another interesting claim Carr makes in this same article is on page 4 in which he states, “When the Net absorbs a medium…It injects the medium’s content with hyberlinks, blinking ads, and other digital gewgaws, and it surrounds the content with the content of all the other media it has absorbed. The result is to scatter our attention and diffuse our concentration.” This claim is interesting to me because I can relate to that experience of jumping from site to site and being distracted by all the different sorts of media that is being displayed on the Internet. So I agree with the statement about how the Net injects the medium’s content, but I disagree with the statement that the result is to scatter our attention and distract the readers. I disagree with this because I believe that the reason there is so many advertisements and mediums on the Net is not to purposely distract the viewers but because the media is radically increasing and shifting so there is so much information to be distributed and all the different companies are distributing the information all at once. So the result is distraction, but I don’t think the distraction is intentional.
Overall, this article explains some valid points about how computers and the Internet are influencing the minds of the people today, some of which can be controversial.
Growing up online
Wednesday, October 28, 2009
Nicholas Carr
Carr also explains that reading and writing has become more difficult and that he and his friends have noticed troubles in these departments. Carr explains this idea saying "Im just seeking convenience, but because the way i Think has changed?" He believes that only after long term study's are done will we truly understand the impact and consciquences of the extended use of the internet and computers.
The last pages of Carrs article explains that artificial intellengence is the goal of the google founders Sergey Brin and Larry Page and how we could turn into an artificial intellegence ourselves in the future. Carr expresses his worries that we are trying to turn ourselves into robots. He says "Their easy assumption that we'd all [b]e better off, if our brains were supplemented or even replaced, by an artificial intellegence is unsettling."(par. 28)
Growing up Online
Growing Up Online
Parents really start to wonder if the internet is a safe place for teenagers. The video demonstrates how teens can change their identities through the net, and also post inappropriate things that could be dangerous to themselves. A concerned parent states “[i]f it’s on the net its open to anyone,” she fears predators and stalkers might find her son or daughter.
Growing Up Online
The internet is almost an escape from reality, in a sense that, in one moment you can access the alter ego online. You can have popularity and be accepted, and have online fame and countless “friends.” The internet is a way for teenagers to display their identity dramatically. Are teenagers displaying too much and too dramatically? That question is on every parent and teacher’s mind. For some parent – child relationships their trust in each other was lost because of how the child used the internet in a particular way to get noticed, such as online relationships, secrets, and overexposure of their bodies in pictures. With the internet, bullying doesn’t just stop at the playground it continues behind closed doors online. Cyber bullying can drive a child off the edge of safety and the feeling of not being secure in your own home is terrifying especially if the child feels as if nobody will understand.
One big factor outside the home environment is the use of the internet at school. Teachers have to try and keep up with this rising generation and the internet. They have to incorporate it into their teaching to reach the student such as the use of Smart Boards and podcasting. In order to reach the students better with these additions teachers almost have to become like entertainers to the students sine the internet is entertainment.
If I were to write a story on the impact of the internet and digital media on my own life, I would write about how confident children think they are when they share their lives on the internet. Since most parents don’t know this world of the internet as well as their children do they have become more intimidated and scared for their children. The internet is a new method for criminals to have access to young and unaware children and this is what parents are afraid of. Children claim that they know to avoid these certain online predators. However I have found that online predators are not direct in what they do online. They do not directly ask for children’s personal information, they are more clever than that. They first befriend you, and since children young and of adolescent age desire to be accepted it is very easy for online predators. And as for adolescent children claiming that it is their person and private life and your parents should mind their own business, your parents are minding their own business! It is the parents responsibility to supervise their children and it is the children’s responsibility to listen and to be attentive to the vulnerability of the internet.
Gowing up Online
If I had to write about the internet and digital media in my life it would cover a large scope. The internet is one of my primary forms of communication. I use Facebook to socialize with friends close and far, and almost everyday I use it to video chat with my girlfriend who is going to school in Chicago. It is very nice to just be able to log on and see and chat with her. I also use video games as a way to hang out with friends. Sometimes my friends and I just want to relax and have fun, and video games provide a way to do that. We'll sit down togethor and try and adventure on some epic quest or engage in a brutal conflict. Video games are a way to go from watching digital media to interacting with it socially. I think the social boon from technology has created great new ways to socialize and interact with another.
"Growing Up Online"
Part two.
If i was doing a a story on the impact of the internet and digital media on my own life, I would probably write about how people obsess over the internet and spend hours/days sitting infront of the computer screen. Internet hasn't necessarily effected my life because I haven't spent alot of time on infront of the computer, but there are days where I sit and just search the web and I generally find really interesting things to do, but chatting with people just annoys me, just call or text me, and same with myspace or facebook, WHY do people love it so much? and obsess over it for that matter, I myself have a facebook and a myspace but I maybe get on it once every two-three weeks just because I keep in touch with family and old friends from where I used to live or something. Otherwise I probably wouldn't have one! When I was younger I use to think it was so fun to put all those new and cool things on my profile and make it whatever I want but now I just dont like that kind've stuff. And as far as creeps on myspace, I just delete those creepy messages (and I tend to get alot of weird old wrinkly men messaging me three-four times a day everyday for months which is just creepy and I just avoid those) and move on to what I got on for. But otherwise I don't think the whole internet thing is so bad but mostly I think kids know what to avoid when it comes to creeps asking for your address!
"Growing Up Online"
If I were to do a story about the impact of internet on my life. I would probably talk about how the internet has given me the ability to contact family and friends that arent near so that I can stay in touch with them. I would say that the internet has affected me positively it has helped me work on school work, socialize and it is entertaining. Overall you just need to watch what you do and how it would affects your life. You just need to be aware that the internet is good but it also is bad. Something that is often forgotten that the internet is very public anyone can access it.
Response to "Growing Up Online"
"Growing Up Online" is a video that was produced and directed by Rachel Dretzin and John Maggio. This video is a view into a teenage child’s social networks and life.
Many students in the video spend as much time away from their families as possible to hide their online activities. this worries the parents because none of them really have any idea what their children are doing, or even who their friends with. what they do know is "[I]f it's not online the kids don't pay attention to it". many parents in the video expressed concern for their children and claim that they need to keep a better watch on their kids, that there are "weirdos" out there. while parents worry about this most if not all the students in the video are worried about their parents finding and going through their private things. most of the students claimed having a "double life" that they are one person in front of their parents but feel like they are faking who that person is; these students are completely different online when they talk to their friends.
Basically this video shows how most people act differently on their computers because there is always others like them somewhere that they can always talk to. and this frightens parents.
If I thought the internet was interfering with anything it wouldn't be communication, I believe that online places to talk are great and that everyone needs someone they can talk to. I think the internet is taking away from our home lives; that most people spend as much time online as they want, neglecting their family, friends, and responsibilities. from personal experience, I have a cousin who if she's not on the phone she's on MySpace. none of really get any time with her, her online friends do, but we don't.
my personal opinion is that many people use the internet as an escape from reality, but what most people don't realize is that the internet is just exposing them to more and sometimes worse things than real life has to offer. almost every time I talk to one of my friends they are talking about some new online drama; it's usually "I was talking to this person on MySpace..." or "you're never going to believe this E-mail I got!” the internet is making peoples lives more complicated than it need be.
Growing Up Online
Growing up online is not without its perks, however. It means that this generation is much more comfortable being in public situations. Posting to your blog or facebook online means that almost anyone can go to your webpage and read it, and this fact does not elude or deter the children that make these online journals. On these mass populated web sites it has become easier than ever to get hundreds, or even thousands of friends. Even becoming someone else entirely has become an option. The internet gives children a blank slate on which to paint their own persona, where how you look, or how you act have little consequence. There are many things that have to be overcome while using the internet, such as online bullying, cyber predators, pedophiles, and what to do with this phonebook of information. Also there is the fact that anonymity makes it even easier to hurt others because nobody knows who is who. I think that it is up to each person, each family, to decide whether the use of internet is for them and to lay down some ground rules (if they are needed). Moderation can easily lead to personal invasion, but if families come to an understanding I believe that the internet can be a very useful tool and a great way for some people to communicate or express themselves.
If I were doing a story about myself on the impact of the internet and digital media I would probably write about how it changes how I entertain myself through watching television online, or even how I turn in assignments. My turning in assignments has been changed in this English 100 class because we are no longer expected to turn in handwritten pen and paper assignments, but we are told to turn in typed or electronic pieces of work instead.
Growing Up Online
If I were to write about how the internet and how it has affected me I would talk about how I’m willing to tell people more when I know who they are, but don’t have to speak to them. I’ve broken friendships and how the world I live is has started to evolve and blend with the media in so many ways. Without the internet it would be so much harder for me to do the work and writing I do. And I’d never talk to some of my closest friends. But also, how the internet has helped me become a stronger person after some pretty rough parts of my life. The internet has hurt me by some of the things I have posted but, it’s beginning to make sense. The important message would be to watch out for what you do post or blog about because in the end it can hurt you. Like Autumn posting photos of herself in lingerie and the school that went to the concert. Not only can people in your town find it, but people that could decide whether or not you can get into college or a job. Teens do make mistakes, and as Danah Boyd sais, “And we have found kids who have engaged in risky behavior on line. Fact is, they’ve in a lot more risky behavior off line.” The only reason why we pay so much attention to what’s on line is because it stays there, and more people can see it than in the real world off line.
Growing Up Online Summary
If I were to write a story about the impact of the internet and digital media on my own life I would write about the power that the media has on girls and women about having to be pretty, thin and believe that this is the image that people want to see. Almost every commercial or pop up add had some version of a beautiful or half naked girl on them. This makes girls think that this is what people want to see. And especially at the age when teen girls are growing and wanting to be wanted. I think this also has a major effect on why girls put inappropriate pictures online of themselves. Its because that’s what they see on TV commercials and movies. When I watch TV or go to a movie I have never not seen guys comment on the “hot chicks” on the screen. Girls notice their reaction and think “I want that attention, I want to be hot like that girl.” Also there is a saying that “sex sells” and that’s why all of these girls are being advertise to sell products or are cast for movies. Guys fantasize about them and girls wish they were them. I wonder what it would be like if in the place of every hot girl on a commercial or movie their were really hot half naked guys; I wonder if the tables were turned would guys be insecure too? I am not saying that guys do not feel the pressure to smell good, look good, or be attractive due to the medias influence, I just think that it is more in your face when it comes to women and how it effects a young girls life. It is every where, constantly reminding them that they need to be someone else. They can do this online.
response to Nicholas Carr
Carr claims to have noticed a lack of concentration or focus when reading written texts, and believes that it is because you can find all your needed information online in much less time than reading. "Research that once required days in the stacks or periodical rooms of the libraries can now be done in minutes. A few Google searches, some quick clicks on hyperlinks, and I've got the telltale fact or pithy quote I was after." (par. 2) What Carr is saying is that the need to focus on text of any kind is no longer there. We can obtain almost whatever information we need with a few clicks of a mouse.
However some feel that their ability to focus on things for more than a short period of time is lacking. "Bruce Friedman, who blogs regularly about the use of computers in medicine, also has described how the internet has altered his mental habits.’I now have almost totally lost the ability to read and absorb a longish article on the web or in print,' he wrote earlier this year."(par.5) this adds to Carr's opinion because it is someone's personal story as to how the internet has affected their thought process.
This paper provides a lot of back-up research, and not just stories. Paragraphs 6-8 talk about scientific studies that have been done to show the effects of the internet on the human thought process. "It is clear that users are not reading online in the traditional sense; indeed there are signs that new forms of 'reading' are emerging as users 'power browse' horizontally through titles, contents pages and abstracts..." (par.7) This shows that many people only skim through the things they find online, hoping to move on to the next best thing.
This paper illustrates how many people spend a lot of time online looking at whatever they want/can, however they do not absorb as much as a person who only reads written texts. Carr is stating that the internet in interfering with our ability to concentrate.
Growing Up Online response
More kids are using the internet as outlets, and begining to use social networking, rather than actual socially gatherings. Facebook and Myspace together have over 160,000,000 members. One of the kids, known only as Greg, explains "...you have to have the internet on to talk to your friends, cause everybody uses it. Its like a currency. If you don't use it, you're gonna be at a loss". The internet is simply ingrained into all of our lives, and without it, we're left in a different age, considered ancient. But problems come with this access to everything. Ryan Halligan, was a victim of cyberbullying, and sadly, commited suicide. His father, with a crack in his voice, spoke "[t]he computer and the Internet were not the cause of my son's suicide, but I believe they helped amplify and accelerate the hurt and the pain that he was trying to deal with that started in person, in the real world." As sad as some things may be, people on the net aren't victims, but participants. Everyone is choosing to submerge their lives in the net. And this is why, according to video, created possibly the greatest generation gap.
"Growing Up Online" Response
all these situations going now where people are posting pictures with incriminating things like alcohol in it. People can get caught; people can get kicked out of school. I mean, it's risky, it's really risky when you put pictures on[line].” By stating this Bukata believes once you join a website like, Facebook, MySpace and all the others your life is pretty much open for the world. You can see when someone is in a relationship, when they break up, and pretty much anything about them. Whoever you add as a friend, whether or not you know them, they can take what you add and post it elsewhere. This video also talks about online bullying. It is easier for kids to fight online then it is in person. They can send their friends messages about you that they might not want you seeing and it is pretty open so normally you would most likely see it.
I use the internet all the time, its almost like part of my life because I use it for some many things. Facebook, School, and just when I’m bored, like YouTube. I think it has a good impact because without Facebook I would not be able to talk to so many people that I do, like friends that live far away. It is also good so I can do my school work, I’m taking an online class, so the internet is very important right now. Without our computer I would constantly have to be somewhere else, like the library or the school. I would probably text more too, if I didn’t have a computer, because I socialize on the computer with my friends a lot.
Growing Up Online
Frontlines story "Growing Up Online" produced and directed by Rachel Dretzin and John Maggio, was about how internet is affecting teens and kids. Internet is suppose dto be a place where people can socialize with friends, be able to find sources for home work, and entertainment. The video showed teens who were addicted to the internet and varies adults and there opinions about how kids should or should not have computers. Some adults were saying that the kids should give them there passwords for everything so safety reasons. Others were saying that the internet can be safe as long as kids are taught the proper ways to make it safe, like the stop and block method. Most kids have a whole another personality life online that there parent's don't even know about, 160 million people are user on with either Myspace or Facebook.
The internet used to be a big part of my life. When I was in middle school we had gotten our first house computer, and I remember being on it daily, even though at the time it wasn't consider the cool thing to do yet. But after several years I became less and less interested in the computer social life and began only using it for when ever I had home work and needed to research something. I believe I became less interested because texting became the new quicker way to have a social life. If I the internet taken away from me today, the only affect I'd feel from it, is that I would start having to go to the library more often. But if I had it taken away when I was younger I could defiantly see how my social life would have been altered.
Growing Up Online
Essay done by Melissa Geneser
With this documentary on, “Growing Up Online,” we see the effect the Internet has on teens today.
The obsession that the Internet is for teens and how they “can't live without it,” or so they say. The become another person when they go online, they become the real them, not the fake one that they show people at school and in public settings. So in a sense they are living a lie, having multiple identities. They compete to see how many “friends” they can have on facebook/myspace, when really only 50 are their true friends and 200 they have at least met. How does the Internet effect my life? Well, to tell you the truth I could live without it. Maybe its because my parent have not let it become an obsession for me and that I only got facebook 3 ½ months ago. In my opinion the Internet has greatly helped me in my writing, and I am most appreciative for it, the reason I don't have it as an obsession like most teens, is because I find that there is more important thing in life that I would rather do. Things that will further my education and get me closure to my dream job.(which is law enforcement, well Secret Service or FBI) I don't see how kids can spend so much valuable time sitting in a chair talking to friends for hours at a time, and not do anything that can really benefit their futures. Well they are effecting their futures, but not in a beneficial way.
Tuesday, October 27, 2009
Is Google Making Us Stupid
"Growing Up Online" Response
Danah Boyd, from the Harvard Berkman Ctr. for Internet & Society, explains, “[t]his is a generation that sees online not as a separate place you go, but as just a sort of continuation of their existence. It’s socialization, it’s learning about life.” In making this comment, Boyd argues that the way our generation interacts socially with one another is based greatly online. Author of “MySpace Unraveled,” Anne Collier, complicates matters further by saying, “[i]t’s really hard to control what you’re kids are doing online. What we have here is a kind of the new Wild West, nobody is really in charge.” Collier complains that there is no supervision in the online world.
I, myself, can agree with the argument that today’s generation is growing up largely online. Not only do I use the internet for my social life, but also for my studies and schooling, and entertainment. Yes, there is a lack of authority in the online universe but there are also great benefits. Without the internet, I probably wouldn’t be in contact with some of my friends from high school. Without the internet, I wouldn’t even be able to complete my school assignments for the reason that they are to be turned into blogs. Although the internet can be dangerous, being informed of threats as well as the internets’ advantages can make this generation worthwhile members of the online world.
http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/pages/frontline/kidsonline/view/
Is Google Making Us Stupid? - response
But this change is going on on a much larger scale. Carr talk's of Frederick Winslow Taylor, and how he was the Industrial Revolution's long awaited philospher (par. 23), and how he found the most effecient way to have factory workers work, to maximize productivity. The workers complained of these robotic motions, but the speed of the work they did, made the executives very happy, and this philosophy was kept up. Fastforwarding to now, Google is trying to apply this "Taylorism" to thought. "What Taylor Did for the work of the hand, Google is doing for the mind" (par. 25). And this, to Nicholas Carr, is why Google is making us stupid. It is trying to, when Carr uses Google's chief executive Eric Schmidt's words, is "striving to 'systemize everything'" (par. 25).
With all of our brains being "systemized," there won't be space for free thought, and creativity, and that is why Google is making us less intelligent, according to Carr.
Is Google making us stupid?
that web users are subliminally conditioning their minds for lethargic reading, or it could just as likely be that as an individual he is losing attention span with age.
Carr’s essay was confusing to me at first because he spent half the essay illustrating the wonders of Google, only to tear down the image of online search engines. But it later made sense when I reviewed a few paragraphs and I saw that Carr had stated, “But that boon comes at a price.” (Par.4) In other words this means that although search engines are a blessing for research, computing, or figuring out general information that may otherwise take a long time to find, they also create a void of dependence upon our instant satisfaction technology.
But perhaps people are being rewired for the better. As scary as it seems, maybe we live in a world where snap decisions and quick judgment will serve us well, especially in the workplace. This positive outlook on being rewired is given when car claims, “For me, as for others, the Net is becoming a universal medium, the conduit for most of the information that flows through my eyes and ears and into my mind.” (Par.4) Maybe as a whole we need this universal medium. Perhaps it is the beginning of the next step of cultural evolution, or maybe it is just a fad that will fade with enough time.
"Is Google Making Us Stupid?
Carrs main claims mla form! Is Google Making Us Stupid?
According to Nicholas Carr, "For me, as for others, the Net is becoming a universal medium, the conduit for most of the information that flows through my eyes and ears and into my mind. The advantages of having immediate access to such an incredibly rich store of information are many, and they've been widely described and duly applauded... As the media theorist Marshal McLuhan pointed out in the 1960s, media are not just passive channels of information. They supply the stuff of thought, but they also shape the process of thought. And what the Net seems to be doing is chipping away my capacity for concentration and contemplation. My mind now expects to take in information the way the Net distributes it: in a swiftly moving stream of particles. Once I was a scuba diver in the sea of words. Now i zip along the surface like a guy on a Jet Ski" (par. 4). Basically Carr is saying that the internet can give the answer quick, short, and to the point. Where as reading a novel you would really have to go indepth into finding the answer its just not given to you. The internet has changed his way of thinking, the Net is over powering the human mind.
Nicholas Carr "Is Google Making Us Stupid"
“In deciding when to eat, to work, to sleep, to rise, we stopped listening to our senses and started obeying the clock” (Carr par 15). By stating this Carr is saying we no longer listen to ourselves, we listen to the clock, the web, etc,. By getting up when the clock tells us, like in the example or reading what may pop up while you are online, instead of a book that we should read.
“My mind now expects to take in information the way the Net distributes it: in a swiftly moving stream of particles. ‘Once I was a scuba diver in the sea of words. Now I zip along the surface like a guy on a Jet Ski’” (Carr par 4) When Carr states this he is talking about how he used to read deeper into the books, not just skim over the words. The internet has changed the way he reads.
Carr explains “When the mechanical clock arrived, people began thinking of their brains as operating like ‘clockwork.’ Today, in the age of software, we have come to think of them as operating like ‘computers’” (par 16). When Carr explains this he is saying we depend more on the computer then on our own brains. Because we have started to believe our brain is telling us what the computer actually is.
Nick Carr's "Is Google Making Us Stupid?"
The article starts the quote from Stanley Kubrick’s 2001 A Space Odyssey; “Dave, stop. Stop, will you? Stop, Dave. Will you stop Dave?”(par. 1.) This was from a movie written in 1968, about a super computer that controls the ship on the trip in space. Carr uses this passage to get his idea across. Carr states “Over the past few years I’ve had an uncomfortable sense that someone, or something, has been tinkering with my brain, remapping the neutral circuitry, reprogramming the memory.”(par. 1.) Then he goes on to state how he used to, “Immersing myself in a book or a lengthy article used to be easy.” (par. 1.) Then he talks about recently. “Now my concentration often starts to drift after two or three pages.” This is the before and after affect on how much time he has spent online. Carr says, “For more than a decade now, I’ve been spending a lot of time online, searching and surfing and sometimes adding to the great databases of the internet.” This has been the reason why Carr has altered his reading habits.
Then Carr later goes on to talk about, “Bruce Friedman, who blogs regularly about the use of the use of computers in medicine, also has described how the Internet has altered his metal habits.” (par. 5.)Carr then goes to state a quote from Bruce Friedman’s own writing, “I have now almost totally lost the ability to read and absorb a longish article on the web or in print.”(par. 5.) This just shows that Carr isn’t the only one who feels that the world of internet has changed the way people think. Searching on the internet has changed the way in which we learn and read text. The reason used is that “the Internet has altered his mental habits.”(par. 5. ) What Friedman talks about shows reasons as to the Internet does mess with our minds. People of this culture no long write as much at a time or read as much as a time. Friedman states, “Even a blog post of more than three or four paragraphs is too much to absorb.”(par. 5.) The amount of knowledge taken in has been decreased.
Later in Carr’s article there is a quote by James Old, “’The brain,’ [according to Olds,] ‘has the ability to reprogram itself on the fly, altering the way it functions.”(par. 12.) Olds talks about the brain beginning able to be changed. What Carr talks about is the internet changing the way in which it thinks from what people get from the Internet. After a few more paragraphs Carr says, “The Net’s influence doesn’t end at the edges of a computer screen, either. As people’s minds become attuned to the crazy quilt of Internet media, traditional media have to adapt o the audience’s new expectations.” (par. 18.) If every way we gather information then we will expect to see all media to change and that will soon make all text shortened and try to keep the interest until people want the change.
Carr’s main claim/controlling idea
Today’s generation may be reading more than anyone else in the 1970s and 1980s, Carr claims, however, it is a different kind of reading, and is this different reading helping us? Maryanne Wolf is worried that it isn’t, “[t]he style of reading promoted by the Net. A style that puts “efficiency” and “immediacy” above all else, may be weakening our capacity for the kind of deep reading that emerged when an earlier technology, the printing press, made long and complex works of prose commonplace,” (par. 7). Not only is the Net promoting the need for immediate updates and information, but so is the media. “As the media theorist Marshall McLuhan pointed out in the 1960s, media are not just passive channels of information. They supply the stuff of thought, but they also shape the process of thought,” (par. 3). If that statement by Marshall McLuhan was only made in the 1960s, just think how much greater influence the media has on the way we think today. Nick Carr, himself, makes an excellent metaphor of how the internet has affected him, “Once I was a scuba diver in the sea of words. Now I zip along the surface like a guy on a Jet Ski,” (par. 3). Carr’s mind now expects to take in information the way the internet distributes it, like “[a] swiftly moving stream of particles.”
Nick Carr makes very interesting claims of how the internet has changed the people who use it, and instead of the internet adapting to us, we are adapting to the it, in which we now think the way the Net does. Carr ends his article with Kubrick’s dark prophecy, “[a]s we come to rely on computers to mediate our understanding of the world, it is our own intelligence that flattens into artificial intelligence,”