Monday, November 23, 2009
Diane Arbus/Barrett
Carr
In my own opinion I believe that technology is killing our ability to right. Its not that it is affecting our academic writing, but it is teaching us other things about writing, and to me it is creating a whole new level of procrastination. Having all the new social networking devices, makes me not want to write a whole 5 page essay, I would rather chat with my friends on Facebook or Myspace. Where before they had technology students would write their essays then go do something. But since the internet has become so easy to access my 8 year old cousin even knows how to use it.
Wednesday, November 18, 2009
Stranger with a Camera Summary
-Tristin
Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Stranger with a Camera
I believe that this question is Barrets main focus of her production. Although, she never directly answered the question. I think that she wanted her viewers to think for themselves about how you can present the life of Americans in a raw way without shaming them while they’re under hard times. Also, she wanted to question how to show America as “America the great” while showing it not to be what it really seems, just as Huge set out to do through his career.
Stranger with a Camera
Stranger with a Camera
"Stranger with a Camera"
Elizabeth Barret, an Eastern Kentucky native herself, investigates the murder of Canadian filmmaker Hugh O’Conner. In 1967 O’Conner was hired to photograph and document images of troubled communities. O’Conner headed to Eastern Kentucky since Pres. Johnson had declared the “War on Poverty” and Eastern Kentucky was named as the “poster child.” Hobart Ison a lifelong resident and landowner in Lecher County, Kentucky, didn’t approve of O’Conner setting foot on his property and photographing him of what he claimed as character assassination by camera. Ison did not want to be portrayed as a person in poverty. He shot and killed O’Conner in self defense in order to avoid being shamed by the camera, “I had to do it. What would he have done to me picture-wise and all?” Ison was sent to prison for ten years however was released after one year on parole. While filming Barret reports that the community thought that Hobart Ison “had stood his ground, and, in doing that, was a kind of hero.” The Kentucky community agrees with Ison’s way of handling the situation, however, it could have been handled in a more effective way.
Elizabeth Barret documents the murder of Hugh O’Conner because she wanted “to tell fairly what I saw; to be true to the experiences of both Hugh O'Connor and Hobart Ison.” “In other words, if communities or events contain diverse points of view, the filmmakers should attempt to represent that diversity.” (Lawrence Daressa, par. 9). Barret posed the question “What are the responsibilities of any of us who take images of other people and put them to our own uses?” She chose Kentucky as a place to film because she describes it as “inundated with picture takers.” To try to photograph with a nonbiased or objective eye is one of the hardest responsibilities for photographers and filmmakers. I believe that by photographing cultural defects and the abnormal not only brings about awareness, but to question the norm of the culture.
In 1968 Ison was sentenced to 10 years in prison and paroled for 1 year. Prosecution accepted a plea bargain so that Ison would only have to serve one year in prison because they could not find a impartial jury. During Ison's trial he stated "that he shot O' Conner in self-defense in order to avoid character assassination by camera: I had to do it. What would he have done to me picture-wise and people who lived on it"(par 4). The community members felt that Ison was a hero because he held his ground. Barret felt it her responsibility to bring both sides of the story. She feels that filmmakers need to represent that diversity.
Stranger With a Camera
I found the film intriguing because it displayed the struggle between those that exploit media to make personal gain, and those that want to be left alone at almost any cost. I found it greatly discouraging because it was an up close look at one of the uglier sides of America and the lengths certain people will go to keep themselves anonymous and unseen from the rest of the world.
There were strong connections between this film and Deshpande’s article because they both talk about how outsiders want us to view them, and the oppressed reality in which they live. Deshpande talks about National Geographic and how they only photograph what they want you to see in the so called “exotic” places they photograph. In this film the outsiders were the residents of eastern Kentucky, Appalachia. They wanted us to view them as decent people, and the oppressed reality was that ever since machines took many of their jobs in the coal mine they really didn’t have much work or money. As a result, not all of them but many became poor. Ison did not want people to think of the residents of eastern Kentucky as indecent so he shot a filmmaker for being on his property, an act which I find almost hysterically ironic.
This film made me think about the injustice that went on in our world, and the possibility that it may still go on today. Hobart Ison only served one year in prison for the murder and in my opinion that was not long enough. Ison’s feeling threatened that his name or state would have its name smeared in no way justifies murder, and I would like to believe that if something similar were to happen today he would probably be facing life in prison.
Stranger with a Camera
Stranger With a Camera - response
Barret on the other hand, was worried that Ison’s actions would make the world see her people as all hillbillies, which happened to some extent. The truth was, a good percentage was impoverished, but definitely not all. And this negative depiction of Kentucky was angering a good percentage, which showed through the support of Ison’s shooting of O’Connor. A trial was held, but no jury could be mustered, so the court accepted a plea bargain giving Ison one year in prison.
Many other of the people involved in this event, both insiders and outsiders, were interviewed in this documentary: from Ison’s relatives to O’Connor’s coworkers. Mason Elbridge was the man that caught O’Connor’s eye as he was leaving, making him want to stop for one last photo shoot. Elbridge had just gotten off work at the coal mines, and was sitting on the porch, still dirty with all the coal dust, playing with his daughter. Elbridge allowed O’Connor to take his photos, but Elbridge was just a renter on Ison’s land. Ison was warned that there were photographers on his land and rushed to scene, where he told the camera team to leave. They were attempting so, and O’Connor was shot in the chest.
Barret uses this event to portray the affect of the camera. She asks if filmmakers can show poverty without embarrassing the impoverished. The camera is like a gun, exploiting peoples in ways that are often harmful or threating.
with a camera
In the 60s the poverty in America was discovered; the central focus of such poverty was in Kentucky due to the corporations stripping the miners of their resources. Corporations came in and the town became dependent of them for jobs, when they left they devastated the land and left many without resources. It became the area televisions and magazines came to report. People were coming from as far as Canada and from BBC. Volunteers, reporters and politicians swarmed the area to report on the downside of what was once the American Dream and to crusade for the "war on poverty". Along with the many international film crews came Hugh O'Connor in 1967. While documenting the tragedies of this area Hugh O'Connor was shot dead on his last tour in Lecher County by Hobart Ison. O'Connor was on the land of Hobart Ison who was believed in his county and loved his land very much. Everyone that knew him respected him an old friend quotes ”that he would do anything for them but that was his land and he didn't want you on it." Hobart thought that O'Connor like the rest of the reporters who planned on taking pictures of his land to exploit what was going on and show his home in a negative light. Ison felt the need to protect his home, if not much it was still his home and he was proud of it. O'Connor didn't realize what was going on in the community as it was a foreign culture even if they lived in the same country there were still different traditions and values that the Appalachian people upheld. A man from Kentucky quotes "it was strictly a case of misunderstanding the old man thought they were making fun of them, but us hillbillies we don’t bother nobody." Hugh was shot because of miscommunication and misunderstanding, Ison had no former encounters with the technology and cameras other than what the news reporters were doing "your giving a bad image to Kentucky you should hide our poverty." A woman in the film quoted "harsh view of a cameras lens can be very stark." Indeed it was quite stark the view being taken of Kentucky, but parts of the story were left out, there wasn’t documentation of the other side of town where people ate food and went to prom and homecoming with new clothes. Elizabeth Barret in her film "stranger with a camera" is trying to document the preface of why Hobart Ison shot Hugh O'Connor or in her words "what brought these two men face to face." She wants to portray why this happened especially since this is her home, and she two is a filmmaker, she feels some sort of "responsibility."
Stranger With A Camera
Stranger With a Camera
Response by Melissa Geneser
Elizabeth Barret tell the story of the murder of Hugh O'Connor, and the lives of the Eastern Kentucky poor. Hugh O'Connor, strove to bring to all other Americans the true story, behind the poverty of their fellow neighbors. He wanted to help the coal miners lives, to give them a chance to rise out of the hole they had sunk into. A hole of poverty and shame, but they didn't want help. They thought that Hugh, was trying to have the world make fun of them, but it was the other way around. Hugh was trying to create a truthful picture of what the poverty stricken areas really look like, he was trying to show America what some of its people were facing. But what was he payed back with, he was shot and killed, just because he was trying to help those people. And the man that killed him, was free after a year. There was definite miscommunication on everyones part, the people believed that he was filming and taking pictures of them and the way they lived, so he could mock their way of life. After the machine was invented, there became less a need for workers to dig out the mines. There were many unemployed and poor people, after the machine came to Kentucky. The people were going hungry, and the education system, if you could call it that, was lacking. The people were socially behind their time, and O'Connor was wishing to show the world that their were people in their own country that needed help as well as others out side of it. I think that O'Connor believed that he could make a difference in the world, but he was restrained from succeeding to that goal.
Monday, November 16, 2009
"Stranger with a Camera"
Elizabeth Barret in her documentary “Stranger with a Camera” talks about a murder of Hugh O'Connor in 1967. O'Connor was filming with his crew in Jeremiah, Kentucky, he was in the property of Hobart Isan. O'Connor was filming Isan's property, he decided O'Connor was invading his space, Isan thought they were laughing and making fun of him, states Barret. Isan yelled “[g]et off my property!” O'Connor turned to say they were leaving, but it was too late, Isan shot his gun. O'Connor died one day before the birthday of his 10 year old son. The next day people drove by the hotel that the filming crew was staying at yelling at them as if they did something wrong. No one wanted to admit that Isan did anything wrong, they did not want to think that someone in their community was wrong. Isan did not feel any guilt for this murder, he felt that he had to do it. Isan states “I am not crazy! I shot the guy for what he was doing.” A camera is like a gun, it is very threatening and not always true. You can take a picture and change it to be how you want it to be, or just take pictures of the things that interest you the most. Just like what the film makers in this documentary were doing. A family was interviewed and asked what they eat for breakfast. The mother states that the baby eats gravy and eggs and the rest of the family has coffee and cigarettes. Barret is saying that we seem to capture on film what is the most interesting to us, which in most cases is the poverty stricken areas. The people in the Kentucky community were pretty mad about this, they do not want people thinking they only live in poverty, because there are places in their community that are not poor. So we should not always only capture the bad moments in peoples lives, but also the good. Because when we only show the bad we will think that is all there is in the community, we wont realize how much more there is to these peoples lives.
Stranger with a Camera
Wednesday, November 11, 2009
Response to Cynthia Selfe
In her article “Lest We Think The Revolution is a Revolution” Cynthia Selfe states “the new electronic landscape retains a value on innovation, hard work, and the individual contributions of people of both genders, but only as they are practiced appropriately-within the traditionally gendered contexts we have historically and culturally ratified for women and men in our culture.” Basically what Selfe is saying is that technology is innovating for everyone, but only used by men in women in culturally appropriate settings.
While some Americans still feel this way, It is no longer an issue in this day and age. I think Cynthia Selfe is mistaken because she overlooks the fact that sex doesn't matter in a large majority of careers today. Now a days Men and Women are equal. Men can be Nurses, and Women can be Construction workers. Whether you are Male or Female now a days you can do whatever you want. While a small number of people “old fashion” or whatever you want to call it, may still feel that Men are the Labor's and Women take care of the house and family, I still maintain that it's not an issue today. And that technology is not being used based on sex.
The countering move I used is arguing the other side. I did this by showing that Cythina Selfe overlooks the fact that many careers today are not Gender specific, and that a lot of Women are getting jobs today that once were men only jobs. In result women as well as men are using technology in many different ways.
Tuesday, November 10, 2009
Lest We Think the Revolution is a Revolution
Cythnia Selfe
reading response
Selfe’s claim that English Departments are adapting to technology changes rests on the questionable assumption that technology is beneficial to English Departments and what they try to achieve. Waxman, Connell, and Gray in “A Quantitative Synthesis of Recent Research on the Effects of Teaching and Learning With Technology on Student Outcomes” found in their research that teaching and learning with technology had a small positive impact on the student’s outcome. A survey taken in the 2005-06 school year for Technology Counts 2006 showed that 40 states had technology standards for teachers in order to promote innovative practices. Although teachers and students had access to technology, the level of improvement in the students on an academic level was unnoticeable. This showed that the technology offered was not being used effectively. The Waxman, Connell, and Gray research and the survey for Technology Counts 2006 convince me that the changes that English Departments are taking to integrate technology are not necessarily worth it. Teachers continue to use their traditional teaching habits and their students are not benefiting from the access to and use of technology.
Uncovering values was defined in “How to Do Things with Text” as “when you surface a word or concept for analysis that a text has left undefined or unexamined”. I applied this countering strategy by countering Selfe’s claim that the English Department’s adaptions to technology changes have been a benefit. In my countering I mentioned how the English Departments are changing because of technology but I explained that it was not serving the purpose that the Department intended to achieve.
Cynthia L. Selfe is the Humanities Distinguished Professor of the English department at Ohio State College of Humanities, as well as the author of several books about technology. In an excerpt from her book, Lest We Think the Revolution is a Revolution: Images of Technology and the Nature of Change Ms. Selfe says that "Because our culture subscribes to several powerful narratives that link technological progress closely with social progress, it is easy for us – Americans, in particular – to believe that technological change leads to productive social change." She goes on to say "we hope computers can help us make the world a better place in which to live." In making this comment Selfe is arguing that Americans have embraced the use of technology and expect it to have a beneficial influence on society and in their personal lives.
I am an American who has not necessarily "embraced" the use of technology, but rather been dragged kicking and screaming into using it. I have felt for several years now that the use of technology has been quietly eroding societal bonds. While I do concede that technology has many positive applications I fail to see how productive social changes are being made. Quite to the contrary I feel that we are losing touch with the sense of community that Americans used to feel, that the more we connect to the Internet the more we disconnect from each other. I’m speaking for instance about local banks, merchants, or utility offices where you used to be able to walk in and know the person you were dealing with, now being replaced by online banking, shopping and billing. Not all Americans believe the changes that technology has been leading us to thus far will make for a better world.
To counter Ms. Selfe’s comment that Americans believe technological change leads to productive social change, and the hope that computers will make a better world, I held myself up as an American who does not hold this belief or hope. I believe I argued the other side by discussing the sense of disconnect and loss of community that has been a by-product of some of the applications on the Internet.
Rodney's Countering Blogpost
While most Americans choose to believe in this vision, it does not exist in our day and age. There are many people in this world and even in America itself that do not even have access to modern technology, much less the ability to use it. There are countries that do not even have running water. As Americans we buy into this myth for selfish reasons, we like to believe this because it makes us feel good, we like to believe that that every one is as well off as we are, that everyone has all of the things we have. The thought of starving families, and sick and dying children sickens us. So we have created this “illusion”, this “alternate reality” in which everyone lives the same way we do.
I used the uncovering values method of countering. My paragraph demonstrates this method because I used some information that was left out of this passage in order to show the faults and flaws of this statement.
Monday, November 9, 2009
Images of Technology and the Nature of Change
Cynthia L. Selfe
1.Paragraph- “It is common sense, after all to link computers with change.” Computers/Technology has caused great change,
2.Paragraph - The English departments have adjusted to change, they have to adjust to something that has become such a huge part of every day life.
3.Paragraph – People believe strongly that technology is a huge asset in life, but they are also fearful of the change it will and has caused.
4.Paragraph- Technology affects the English teachers in extreme ways, example: The writing of the students have changed, there are so much online information to be attained.
5.Paragraph “ To believe that technological change leads to productive social change.”
6.Paragraph- Teachers are happy about technology, it has made there jobs easier in some ways and more of a challenge in others.
7.Paragraph- Americans hope that computers and technology will make the world a better place.
8.Paragraph- Technology has helped the government become better at financial and political problems that this world faces. Making for a better place and world.
9.Paragraph- “Technology threatens to disrupt the world,” technology has changed how the world thinks and views things.
10.Paragraph-Snapshots help the people see clearer and understand better real life.
11.Paragraph- There are complications/or mixed feelings about technology and the hold it has on our generation.
Cynthia Selfe believes that technology is changing the world, for better or worse, she doesn’t say out right, but you do receive the feeling that it is for the better. She feels that technology especially the computer, has been greatly embraced by the English teacher. It has opened the door for new and interesting topics and ideas that would not have come about without the invention of technology. The internet helps more than just the average people it also helps the government, the financial and political aspects. Though many people have mixed feelings about technology, the benefits out way the bad.
summary
It is easy to accept that technology is producing change. Cynthia L. Selfe agrees in her chapter Lest We Think the Revolution is a Revolution Images of Technology and the Nature of Change. Selfe explores exactly what changes are occurring with the wealth of technology and the ideas being promoted through the technological revolution virtually seen almost everywhere in America. Selfe believes that us, meaning most Americans, are still on the fence about our idea of the impact technology is having on society. Cynthia Selfe observes that we believe in the power and benefits the computer has to offer us, however we are still skeptical of whether h the effects will change familiar systems in our lives. Selfe notes "IN addition, these attitudes shade subtly into one another at multiple levels of a larger collective social experience, and they are worth exploring for that reason as well." Selfe explores several narratives that we Americans "subscribe" to about technology, through everyday advertisements. The first narrative "The 'Global Village' and the 'Electronic Colony'" discusses the internet allowing us Americans to view other countries and become apart of the globe's multi cultural family. The second narrative Selfe touches on is about "Land of Equal Opportunity" and "Land of Difference" something we are all familiar with living in the U.S. and constantly hearing how we are all the same. Narrative two reiterates the classic tale of how the internet will change circumstances for all regardless of their race, gender, origin, economic status etcetera. The final narrative explored in the "the Un-gendered Utopia and the same old gendered stuff." Selfe claims that while it is said that technology is to change constructed ideas of gender and equalize the educational properties of the computer forall, which is not the reality. After noticing that computer games are stilll made for boys and computer commercials are still aimed mainly at males Selfe believes that "Computers, in other words, are complexly socially determined artifacts that interact with existing social formations and tendencies-including sexism, classism, and racism to contribute to the shaping of a gendered society." She is saying that despite the idea being pushed that technology will shorten the distance between the gaps in gender the divide is still evident between the two. We can't fathom the idea of a fluid gender system; our ideas of gender are so concrete that the idea of revolutionizing their construction via internet is fearful. Selfe agrees "[we} revise the script of the narrative to fit more snugly within the historically determined contexts that are familiar and comfortable to us. In doing so, however, we also limit our cultural vision of gender with technological landscapes-constraining roles and expectation and possibilities to those we have an already constructed as a culture, limiting the potential for change by subscribing to a conventional framework for our imagination. People are still being bombarded with advertisements of traditional 1950's families when the case is its more common to see a single parent without time to take care of a dog or their white picket fence. The advertisements referencing yester year communicate to their audience women using technology the enhance their lives and benefit their families. Women can use technology but only within their provided gender role, to organize soccer practice not to create a new technological advancement.
Lest We Think the Revolution is a Revolution" Par 1-11
Selfe's Essay Summery
After the introduction of the land of equal opportunity, the article begins to talk about American commercials, and how they focus on using those “American Myths” to sell their product, while they are actually saying very little in the process. The American Myth does most of the talking in that the reader or viewer is expected to have foreknowledge of our culture that has been dubbed our “cultural memory”, and can easily piece most American myths together. This is illustrated best by when Selfe claims “…cultural memory is a potent one for Americans, and these ads resonate with the values that we remember as characterizing that golden time”. This furthers that there is a traditional line of thinking in America that we call the American dream, and that that dream took place in the Golden time. The golden time, to me, represents not a specific time that we could put a date on, but a time from each of our pasts that we remember fondly, such as our childhood when nothing went wrong. During this time is when we learned of the American dream, and there were significantly less problems that we had to deal with, perhaps not because they weren’t there, but because we didn’t have to deal with them.
Cynthia L. Selfe
Cynthia Selfe-Reading response
Cynthia Selfe intro
The introduction, of the essay, starts off saying that technology is linked to change. And the English Department is adjusting to this change from technology. Technology has its good and its bad sides. Some people believe that it can improve our lives while others fear the effect of technology. Technology affects the work of English related jobs. "[i]t is easy for us-for Americans, in particular-to believe that technological change leads to productive social change" (293). Americans believe that technology will lead to a better change of the social environment. Hoping to create critical thinkers through the optimism of being “more productive, more effective as communicators” and to be “more responsibly involved as literate citizens in world affairs.” However optimism about technology “often masks” an extreme set of contrasting potent fears. Teachers are content with technology and hope that computers are able to help us since we have “modified many programs to include technology training and use,” (292). Selfe continues with three narratives, with the help of images produced by technology, tell rich and powerful stories, that they reveal hidden messages and meanings to advertise the technological world.
Selfe Intro
Cynthia Selfe - Lest We Think The Revolution is a Revolution (response)
Selfe Reading Response
Selfe's claim that, our culture is inadequate to imagine women capable of living above her 'constrained set of appropriate settings,' rests upon the questionable assumption that our culture is incompetent to 'think outside of the box' and accept change. As our culture changes with time, many of us have to come to the realization that women are capable of working outside of their 'roles.' Men are now competing with women for Managerial and Executive positions in the work force, in many households the roles have been switched and women are know the "bread-winners" for the family and in the greatest jump from 'roles', a woman now plays are large role in our government. As many of us see these changes and acknowledge them, Selfe's 'The Same Old Gendered Stuff' narrative begins to take a back seat, as we have now begin to understand and accept the roles of women are expanding and the boundaries are becoming more skewed.
The Countering strategy I used was 'Uncovering Values.' My paragraphs demonstrate this strategy by first assessing what Selfe's claim is and then questioning her central claim with examples that refute the claim.
Cynthia L. Selfe Summary
Cynthia Selfe
I believe Selfe is mistaken, because she is overlooking what has gone on in our recent history, especially with the previous presidential race. There was a female candidate in Hillary Clinton, who almost won the democratic nomination, and there was little having to do with her being a woman but more to do with her ideas. But even on the republican side of things, Sarah Palin was the republican vice president nominee, and there was very little criticism to the idea of having a woman in a traditionally male dominated office. While neither woman won the position each was going for, there wasn’t a huge deal made out of women trying to make a move in politics which has been associated as a “man’s” job in our society.
I countered Selfe’s idea using Arguing the other side with the first template. I stated how she overlooked the present trends even in politics. Where women are starting to make a name in a field that gives immense power that has been traditionally dominated by males in the past.
Uncovering Values
-We used both templates:
X's claim that____rest upon the questionable assumption that____.
"___" by focusing on ____, X overlooks the deeper problem of ____.
-We were civil about countering his opinion, we weren't rude or disrespectful.
-We found a surfacing concept that he left unexammed: he says the Greek tradition of arguement is a superior type of writing.
Alex, Kim, Esther, Ruthie, JT, Trevor, Chelsea
Cynthia L. Selfe "Lest We Think the Revolution Is a Revolution"
When talking about the Narrative #2: “Land of Equal Opportunity” and “Land of Difference” Cynthia Selfe talks about, “[T]he magic time of the fifties.”(pg. 302) This was the golden age for American’s when airplanes were the sign of technology advancing. But the narrative or myth of equal opportunity didn’t always work. Selfe states, “American know-how can accomplish in the land of equal opportunity when circumstances are right.”(pg. 302) An ad in Selfe’s article explains, “Technology uninfluenced by traditional American values can run amuck, especially in a postmodern world characterized by, ‘conflicting standards,’ ‘rival companies,’ ‘incompatibilities,’ and inefficient work habits.” (pg. 302-303) Technology advancing would lead up to people fighting and competing to create the better product. It wasn’t how the Americans valued things. If the values went ignored then the technology and standards wouldn’t be met.
Then Selfe goes on to talk about “[A] typical American family” (pg. 303) The idea of Narratives goes along with Robert Sholes “On Reading a Video Text” Scholes has the idea that, “In processing a narrative text we actually construct the story, bringing a vast repertory of cultural knowledge to bear upon the text that we are contemplating,(par. 4)” This connects to Selfe when she talks about the ads trying to convince people about the internet. They used the idea of her narratives to get more people to go along with the internet and start to use it. This add was to “suggest that citizens of the twenty-first century can achieve the same kind of happy security and personal well being that was enjoyed by citizens of the fifties.”(pg. 303) The ads are a type of media that the generation of the fifties had. It was the beginning of media and over time it became the video texts that we know now.
Dissenting
Rodney, Kiefer, Mariah, Cassandra, Areisha, Scarlet
Group 1, Arguing the other side
Arguing the other side
Dylan, Andy, Cecily, Phillip, Anjulie, Taylor, Sarah
In Clive Thompson's essay "The New Literacy," Stanford professor Andrea Lunsford argues that the explosion of online writing is good on a technical level. Lunsford believes students are to asses their audience in a more convorsational public setting, instead of the traditional argument that a asynchronous letter or essay writing allows. We dissagree with professor Lunsford's view that online writing has done students good becasue recent research has shown there is more to being a good writer than having the ability to assess you audience on a personal level. In Graff and Birkensteins book "They Say I Say," they propose that to be an efficient writer one must be able to demonstrate the proper moves of writing, which is using templates, being thorough and having evidence to support your ideas. When we try to adjust our tone for our audience we don't show the proper moves to make our writing as good as experts.
Reasons:
-We used template #3 on the blue paper, "I dissagree with X ________"
-Evidence to argue point Lunsford is making
-Also use yes, but move yes assesing your audience is good, but not all you need to be a good writer.
-Harris says argueing the other side is showing the usefulness of a term or idea that a writer has criticized or noting problems with one that she/he argued. We did this by agreeing with Lunsford that writing to your audience is important but not the only thing needed to be a good writer. The right "moves" are also needed.
Sunday, November 8, 2009
Selfe reading response
In my paragraph I used the argument style of dissenting. I used this because I did agree somewhat with what Selfe was saying in this section of her paper. However I didn’t agree with one small portion of it (the quote that I used is an example.) I showed how I agreed with her and then I went on to say how I disagreed because I felt that she was missing some key information.
Response to Selfe
Response to Cynthia Selfe
In the essay that Cynthia Selfe wrote called “Lest We Think the Revolution is a Revolution”, she draws a big focus on the change of technology, and how we are adjusting to all these changes. She really explains how everything is changing and how were all adapting and dealing with this differences that are rapidly changing our everyday lives. In her essay, “Lest We Think the Revolution is a Revolution”, Selfe states, “Like most Americans, however, even though educators have made these adaptations, we remain decidedly undecided about technology and change. At one level, we believe in the pairing; we believe in the computer’s power, and we believe strongly in the beneficial ways that technology promises to improve our lives.” With her passage from her article, I can see she is making a good point. Basically Selfe is saying that educators have adapted to the technological changes we are facing in the world today and the rest of us remain undecided about it. Some thoughts that Selfe may be saying are most definitely not proven facts. She makes the assumption that most all educators are adapted to new technology and most everyone else is unsure about it.
From the second narrative, the main focus is really about our connection to technology. She talks about accessing and our opportunity we have with this technology, which I think was mainly focused on Internet and computer ideas. I think Selfe’s ideas in her passage are mistaken because she is using her own opinion rather than actual facts to support her claim. How is she to know that most all educators have adapted to technology. Also how is she to know for sure that “we” meaning the rest of Americans are undecided about technology and change.
The countering strategy I used was “Arguing the Other Side.” I felt like this strategy was appropriate because in Selfes essay she uses her own opinion to support her idea. This strategy is best for this passage because it gives me the chance to contradict her claim because I feel like there are many educators that have not adapted and many Americans who most definitely have.
Cynthia L. Selfe "Global Village"
claims about how the evolution of technology is effecting the world. Selfe disscusses the idea of
the “global village”. I believe that what Selfe is saying is that the “global village” in theory can bring the world together through technology, and not be discrimatory. Selfe also describes the “romantic level” of appeal that global village has. What Selfe seems to be saying is that Amercians want other cultures to be like them, but don’t want to compromise anything to do so and that Americans don’t want to be equal to other cultures and give up being the dominate culture, as they have always been in history. What she’s saying in her claims is that Americans want to be seen as the creators of this global village, not as equal members. Although technology has made other cultures more accessable to Americans, they still vision themselves as superior while experiencing the other cultures.
Reading Responce
Self's Response
Reading Response 5
I do agree with the statement that the majority of women in today’s society are still playing the role as housekeeper, but the problem with this revised narrative concerning genders and technology is the fact that many women in today’s society work full-time. Not only do they work, but they work with technology. So, to say that women only use technology to benefit their home lives is wrong.
The situation I created with my quote forced me to choose dissenting for my countering strategy. I feel that my quote states something that is universally known but its missing the fact that women are becoming increasingly more present in the work place.
Friday, November 6, 2009
Selfe summary
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National Geographic Response
"The Confident Gaze" Shekhar Deshpande
the confident gaze by deshpande
"The Confident Gaze" by Shekhar Deshpande
The Confident Gaze
Deshpande also states that "[h]uman suffering becomes worth a good image. The hunger with which the photographers eye looks at the word consumes those images that are transferable into nascent and yet technically perfect photographs" (par 10). Even if the photo is of starving children or homeless obviously hungry people, the photos capture the reader with its color and emotions. We feel bad for these people we see but the photo graph makes it looks better than it really is. Its not the true meaning, its a half meaning of what is really going on. If its not happening to us, if we aren't the ones living like those in these pictures then we are happy.